# Text-based Storyboard — The Faithful Copy

> Kit 18 · The Faithful Copy · deliverable · designed and built by I Wayan Usada · fictional screening service and candidate

## Design premise

A candidate for a trust-critical post: one dramatic, transparent disclosure and one quiet pattern of small omissions. Revised after the build so it matches the 2D dossier and the 3D evidence wall; both read `dossier-data.js`.

## Structure

1. **Tag all twelve documents** as PATTERN, ISOLATED or CONTEXT. Feedback after each tag ("weighted" or "re-read").
2. **Verdict**: appointable with conditions, or decline. Only available once all twelve are tagged.
3. **Write it**: the conditions (for an appointment) or the reason for the committee (for a decline), at least ten words. Conditions are written, not clicked; the earlier build promised this and did not have it.
4. **Debrief**: weighting summary, the reasoning problem if any, your text next to model conditions.

## The twelve documents

| # | Document | Key |
|---|---|---|
| 1 | Voluntary disclosure letter (repaid ticket charge, two years clean) | isolated — the vivid one |
| 2 | Reference check, former manager A | context |
| 3 | Reference check, former manager B (resolved friction) | context |
| 4 | CV vs employer records | context |
| 5 | Debt-register extract (disclosed, current) | context |
| 6 | Social-media note (old joke post) | isolated |
| 7 | Application history: three versions of one certificate | pattern |
| 8 | Interview conduct: candid on the known item, deflects on the certificate | pattern |
| 9 | Colleague survey: “tells you what you want to hear” (2 of 4) | pattern |
| 10 | Employment gaps, verified | context |
| 11 | Former employer email: immediate admission in the dispute | context |
| 12 | Certificate registry: only day one completed | pattern |

## Scoring and pass rule

One point per document weighted as designed (12), two for a sound reading (≥ 3 of 4 pattern documents found, at most one non-pattern document counted as pattern, and never the vivid disclosure), one for the written conditions or reason. Maximum 15. **Pass = sound reading, written text, and 12 or more.** Both verdicts can pass with a sound reading.

The earlier scoring text described the wrong count in two branches (it reported "isolated" tags where it meant false "pattern" tags); fixed.

## 3D evidence wall (flagship v3)
Built in `evidence.js`, `fc-room.js` and `fc-docs.js` on the shared layer; same documents and scoring as the 2D dossier. Every frame below is a render from the shipped build (`node tools/qa/scene_frames.mjs faithful-copy`).

**Design rules.** Light is the lesson. The disclosure letter lies on the desk under a warm desk lamp; the other eleven documents are pinned to the wall in cool window light that fades toward dusk as the learner tags, so the lamp grows more insistent the longer the session runs. The learner can dim it at any time. Each document is the paper it would be (forms, a records table, a register extract, handwritten notes, a printed e-mail, a registry printout), with its full text on the page and in the panel. A PATTERN tag pins a paper tag and ties a red thread to the finding card, pulled taut. The verdict is written and pinned on the finding card. People stay off-screen.

![F1 · 16:40, the case room: overcast light through the blinds, the evidence wall in its aluminium frame, the steel filing cabinet, the desk with its lamp. The ceiling light is off; the window and the lamp light the room.](/work/faithful-copy/screens/frames/f01-room-afternoon.webp)

![F2 · The voluntary disclosure letter, folded in thirds, on the green leather blotter under the warm tungsten lamp, its hand-delivered envelope beside it: the most vivid object in the room, by design.](/work/faithful-copy/screens/frames/f02-letter-under-lamp.webp)

![F3 · The window side: low afternoon sun through the half-open venetian blinds falls in bands on the floor beside the desk; chair rail and coved cornice on the plaster walls.](/work/faithful-copy/screens/frames/f03-window-light.webp)

![F4 · The wall: eleven documents of different kinds around the finding card, with the case-file cover. Multi-page documents show their pages underneath; each sheet throws a soft shadow on the cork.](/work/faithful-copy/screens/frames/f04-wall.webp)

![F5 · Close on a document (a lateral move along the wall): three application forms, three versions of the certificate.](/work/faithful-copy/screens/frames/f05-doc-applications.webp)

![F6 · The interviewer’s handwritten conduct notes on ruled pad paper.](/work/faithful-copy/screens/frames/f06-doc-interview-notes.webp)

![F7 · The registry printout: day one attended, certificate not issued.](/work/faithful-copy/screens/frames/f07-doc-registry.webp)

![F8 · Seven documents tagged; the daylight has started to fade.](/work/faithful-copy/screens/frames/f08-tagged-half-dusk.webp)

![F9 · The vivid trap sprung: the letter tagged PATTERN pulls a thread from the desk to the wall while the real pattern is shelved.](/work/faithful-copy/screens/frames/f09-vivid-trap-thread.webp)

![F10 · At dusk with the lamp dimmed: the letter is lit like any other paper.](/work/faithful-copy/screens/frames/f10-lamp-dimmed-dusk.webp)

![F11 · A sound reading: four threads converge on the finding card from four kinds of paper and four points in time.](/work/faithful-copy/screens/frames/f11-threads-converge.webp)

![F12 · The written verdict is pinned on the finding card.](/work/faithful-copy/screens/frames/f12-verdict-pinned.webp)