# Text-based Storyboard — Friday Rush

> Kit 16 · Friday Rush · deliverable · designed and built by I Wayan Usada · fictional restaurant

## Design premise

A first-week cook on garnish, four moments of a Friday service. Revised after the build so it matches the 2D game and the 3D pass; both read `brigade-data.js`. The earlier storyboard described a different build, and the screen said "12 open tickets" while the moment said 14 (now 14 everywhere).

## Moments

| Time | Moment | Closed-loop step | Best move | Harmful move |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 18:47 | Ticket #48: glutenvrij, guest celiac, chef mid-shout | complete call + wait for "heard" | call it out loud and fetch the clean pan from the top shelf | wipe a used pan (**critical**) |
| 19:12 | Chef's public put-down while table 14 has a nut marker | complete reply + wait for the chef to repeat it | name the allergen, check the stroop pan | plate without checking (**critical**), or walk off the pass (**critical**) |
| 20:03 | Table 3 asks for the third time | — | plate in 60 s, walk it out, find the bottleneck | restock first |
| 21:38 | First compliment; long close list | — | claim the filters and labels, ask for one walkthrough | rush the list |

## Scoring and pass rule

Move 2 / 1 / 0 per moment (8) plus, on the two allergen moments, 1 for a complete call and 1 for waiting for the call-back (4). Maximum 12. **Pass = 9 or more and no harmful move on an allergen moment.** This format differs on purpose from the other conversation trainers in the portfolio: the allergen skill is a closed loop, so the loop is scored.

## 3D pass

Ticket rail with printed tickets (nothing colour-coded), heat lamp, three stations, chef and server, and a pan shelf where the dedicated gluten-free pans sit on the top shelf behind the garnish station. The chef calls back only a complete call. The best gluten move brings the clean pan down from the shelf; the wiped-pan move leaves a visible flour film. The ticket ages on screen while you work (not scored).