# Text-based Storyboard — LMS Pulse
> Kit 20 · LMS Pulse · deliverable · designed and built by I Wayan Usada · fictional composite (Meridiaan College and every number are invented)
## Design premise
Dashboards mix three families of numbers. Revised after the build so it matches what ships: the 2D drill and the 3D funnels both read `pulse-data.js`.
- **Exposure**: completion and satisfaction (who showed up and liked it).
- **Persistence**: when people leave, and before what.
- **Learning**: the post-test delta against the pre-test.
The earlier build said "deltas and drop-offs measure learning". Drop-off is persistence, not learning; that sentence is gone from every artifact.
## Scene plan
| # | Cohort | On screen | Right story | Tempting story | Interventions that fit |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | **A · Finance systems** | 92% completion, 4.6/5, no cliff, −3 pts vs a 71% pre-test, “Confusing!” ×41 | learning problem | healthy, or react to the comment | assessment redesign, content fix |
| 2 | **B · Client communication** | 38% completion, cliff in week 4 before the workshop, +11 pts, “Too busy” ×29 | persistence problem | learning problem (low completion) | workload fix, manager briefing |
| 3 | **C · Compliance refresh** | 97%, 4.9/5, +1 pt vs a 94% pre-test | measurement problem | healthy | assessment redesign, do nothing + instrument |
| 4 | **Debrief** | the three cohorts side by side | | merging them into one average | |
## Interaction
Step 1: choose one of four stories (learning, persistence, measurement, healthy); the same four for every cohort, shuffled, so length or position never signals the answer (the earlier build offered two options per cohort, one obviously longer). Step 2 unlocks after the diagnosis: pick two of six interventions. In 3D each pick is pinned where it acts: intake, the leaking week, the funnel body or the gauge.
## Scoring
Diagnosis 2 + each fitting intervention 1, per cohort; max 12, pass 10 with all three diagnoses right. Order of the two picks is not scored (the earlier copy said it was, but the code never scored it).