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Text-based Storyboard — The Long Goodbye

Kit 15 · The Long Goodbye · deliverable · designed and built by I Wayan Usada · fictional care home · not clinical advice

Design premise

Four moments of one day on a closed ward. Revised after the build so it matches the 2D trainer (Dutch) and the 3D ward (Dutch with English gloss); both read moments-data.js. The earlier storyboard and the case-page hero described different scenes ("she asks for her mother", "the old song"); they now match the build.

Scoring philosophy, resolved

The case said "there are no winning moves" while targeting 7/8. Now: moments 1–3 are practice with a practice score; moment 4 is not scored and ends with a written reflection. Completion = practice 6/9 or more and a reflection of at least eight words.

Moments

TimeResidentWordsFeeling behind themJoining responseTruth as a wall
07:40Mevrouw De Groot"Ik moet naar huis, mijn kinderen zijn alleen!"care and responsibilitywalk with her, ask about the children"uw kinderen zijn volwassen"
11:15Mevrouw Bakker"Jij hebt mijn handtas gestolen!"fear of losing controlsearch together, "find" it in her wardrobe"u hebt hem zelf verstopt"
16:20Mevrouw Visser"Mag ik nu naar huis? De bus gaat om half vijf."longing for home: safety, belongingwalk to the hall together, warm drink, her route home(the door stays locked; arguing about the bus)
19:50Mevrouw Jansen"Pieter komt ons ophalen." (her husband died 14 months ago)— not scored——

Per-moment structure (1–3)

  1. Name the feeling (three options, 1 point).
  2. Choose a response (joining 2, workable 1, wall 0).

Moment 4

Choose a response; feedback discusses the therapeutic-lie debate honestly; then write a reflection ("what did you feel, what would you tell a colleague?").

3D ward

The light follows the day: morning, midday, amber at 16:20, dusk at 19:50. Each resident's restlessness shows as movement; a joining response calms it and, where it fits, the two walk together.

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