Text-based Storyboard — The Faithful Copy
Kit 18 · The Faithful Copy · deliverable · designed and built by I Wayan Usada · fictional screening service and candidate
Design premise
A candidate for a trust-critical post: one dramatic, transparent disclosure and one quiet pattern of small omissions. Revised after the build so it matches the 2D dossier and the 3D evidence wall; both read dossier-data.js.
Structure
- Tag all twelve documents as PATTERN, ISOLATED or CONTEXT. Feedback after each tag ("weighted" or "re-read").
- Verdict: appointable with conditions, or decline. Only available once all twelve are tagged.
- Write it: the conditions (for an appointment) or the reason for the committee (for a decline), at least ten words. Conditions are written, not clicked; the earlier build promised this and did not have it.
- Debrief: weighting summary, the reasoning problem if any, your text next to model conditions.
The twelve documents
| # | Document | Key |
|---|---|---|
| 1 | Voluntary disclosure letter (repaid ticket charge, two years clean) | isolated — the vivid one |
| 2 | Reference check, former manager A | context |
| 3 | Reference check, former manager B (resolved friction) | context |
| 4 | CV vs employer records | context |
| 5 | Debt-register extract (disclosed, current) | context |
| 6 | Social-media note (old joke post) | isolated |
| 7 | Application history: three versions of one certificate | pattern |
| 8 | Interview conduct: candid on the known item, deflects on the certificate | pattern |
| 9 | Colleague survey: “tells you what you want to hear” (2 of 4) | pattern |
| 10 | Employment gaps, verified | context |
| 11 | Former employer email: immediate admission in the dispute | context |
| 12 | Certificate registry: only day one completed | pattern |
Scoring and pass rule
One point per document weighted as designed (12), two for a sound reading (≥ 3 of 4 pattern documents found, at most one non-pattern document counted as pattern, and never the vivid disclosure), one for the written conditions or reason. Maximum 15. Pass = sound reading, written text, and 12 or more. Both verdicts can pass with a sound reading.
The earlier scoring text described the wrong count in two branches (it reported "isolated" tags where it meant false "pattern" tags); fixed.
3D evidence wall (flagship v3)
Built in evidence.js, fc-room.js and fc-docs.js on the shared layer; same documents and scoring as the 2D dossier. Every frame below is a render from the shipped build (node tools/qa/scene_frames.mjs faithful-copy).
Design rules. Light is the lesson. The disclosure letter lies on the desk under a warm desk lamp; the other eleven documents are pinned to the wall in cool window light that fades toward dusk as the learner tags, so the lamp grows more insistent the longer the session runs. The learner can dim it at any time. Each document is the paper it would be (forms, a records table, a register extract, handwritten notes, a printed e-mail, a registry printout), with its full text on the page and in the panel. A PATTERN tag pins a paper tag and ties a red thread to the finding card, pulled taut. The verdict is written and pinned on the finding card. People stay off-screen.
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